Monday, March 11, 2013

short story

Short Story Our story starts on a nice saturday afternoon and a boy named John follow this girl Joan on instagram and then he found he her kik. so he massage her and she text back and said omg i was going to just message you and John thought wow. She was going to message a beautiful girl he didn't know and they began talk everyday and everyday they started to like each other more and more to which it started to be become and they started to talk about their future and what they wanted to be when they grow up. if they wanted a family. John is dying to see this girl but at last he can't because of his mother doesn't want him to see the girl but he doesn't care what she says because he love her but then he get in trouble in school and she takes his phone and he does know how to talk to her because that was the only way that he could talk to her but he finds away and she love him more for it and where Joan lives she going thru hard times because she was getting in trouble in school and she really want to see John and she need to work harder in school and so did John and so one day they could be together and they did just that for three more years and but their parents wouldn't let them leave to see each other and so John and Joan left to be together and they meet in florida and they began their lives to together and she started to work as a schoolteacher and John as a auto repair man and they started to make a family and they did start to talk to their family again and it work they went to massachusetts and california to see their parents and their brother and sister and them lived a great life together and they had kids Anthony and miya and their kids had kids and they went to family trips and the family got bigger and there was so much love because of two kids that fell in love and it all started with a text that said hey and any is possible and dreams will come true.

7 comments:

  1. The story overall was good. In the beginning there were a few grammar mistakes

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  2. yayyy..... this was an interesting story. (-:

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  3. few mistakes. need more words and dialogue

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  4. juni you bring great happyness to my life from your very well coiced words from the ediket you put them in very nice young lad these story was sent down from the heavens kk gtg by j

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  5. thanks aquan u bring great happpyness to my life and u r like a brother to u guys all r and ill do anything for u man

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  6. Life is funny; my mother never had a maternal bone in her body. She never longed for a baby and in fact when she was told she was infertile she was delighted. She met my father, who wanted at least four children, and she hid this fact. Ironically she wasn't infertile at all and she went on to have six children. If you have been interested just check out this weblink.

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