Scott pilgrim from Scott pilgrim vs the World
Mr.Hillyer from The Time Machine
Once
upon a time Scott Pilgrim was walking and he meet a man named
Mr.Hillyer and they were from two story scott was from a story that he
had to fight his girlfriend seven evil ex boyfriend and each one had a
different power and Scott got better with fight and the guitar by each
person he fought and Mr.Hillyer story is that he want to time traveller
and he did a lot of thing to get to time traveller. Scott and Mr.Hillyer
were at the coffee shop in Scott world and thing were going great but
then Scott has to fight one of Ramona’s ex boyfriend and mr.Hillyer was
scared and he hid in the trash. Scott fought Todd Ramona third ex
boyfriend and he was a vegan and being a vegan gave him power to kill
anything that was in his way and he can shout layer out his eye and
shout scott into wall. Todd date Scott’s ex girlfriend Envy but her real
name was natalie then scott didn’t know that they were dating and he
was mad because she punch scott's ex girlfriend knives chau and hit her
so hard that she slap the high light out her hair. Mr.Hillyer didn't
know what to do because Scott and Todd were fighting so bad that the
earth was shaking and then Scott punch Todd to the moon and landed on
the hole that he made on the moon for Envy and Mr.Hillyer had to fight
with his best friend and he went to Todd and help Scott fight Todd and
then the vegan police showed up and what they didn’t was that Todd was
eating meat and drinking milk and so they told Todd that he would be
strip of his vegan power and lost his power and Scott punch Todd in the
face and his whole body turn into coins and Mr.Hillyer went to Scott and
he told him that he was dating knives chau for a week or two now and he
was sorry because he didn’t know that he dated knives and then Scott
told him is ok that he dates knives and then Scott ,Ramona And Knives
chau and Mr.Hillyer lived happily ever after.
The End By Juni Sanchez
i have never read these books but now i know what there are somewhat about.
ReplyDeletethis is the best thing i have eaver read in my life i just dont understand the seting of the story and the charcters
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ReplyDeleteI feel a little cinfused with this story like there was no detail at all. I can see scott punching him to the moon. Why didnt Mr hillyer help? i feel he didnt use any strong description what so ever. He diidnt have dialoge in this story. there was alot of run on sentences.
ReplyDeleteI didnt understand this story at all It had lots of run on sentences and i really didnt understand what was going on in the story whats so ever i really think you should use more punctuation in your story next time
ReplyDeleteTHis story was very confusing bcause of the characters.the ending was confusing because there was no concluding sentence
ReplyDeleteThe setting was not described well althought i knew it was in a coffe shop.
There is alot of action but no conversation.
I found the run on sentences very distracting.
Next, time take your time on your assignment.
There were a lot of run on sentences Juni, so I agree with Brendan on this.
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